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In 3-5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> What are some countries that you would never visit? Why would you not visit them?
Take note of the following words:
1. stepping stone
2. productive
i m not sure..
>> I don\'t know for certain.
if i pick some countries that i would never visit , it might be africa area. africa is really far from my country.
>> If I pick some countries that I would never visit, it might be the African region as it\'s very far from my home nation.
so if i want to go there ,i should take some planes for at least 20hours.
>> So if I wanted to go there, I would have to take at least a 20-hour flight.
but if someone invent technology to make faster and productive planes , i might be able to go africa .
>> However, if someone invented a technology to make faster and more productive planes, I would be able to go to Africa.
it will be a great stepping stone for people to get close.
>> It will be a great stepping stone for people to become closer.
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