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2019-04-02 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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[ESSAY] In 3-5 sentences, answer the question below: >> What are some countries that you would never visit? Why would you not visit them? Take note of the following words: 1. stepping stone 2. productive i m not sure.. if i pick some countries that i would never visit , it might be africa area. africa is really far from my country. so if i want to go there ,i should take some planes for at least 20hours. but if someone invent technology to make faster and productive planes , i might be able to go africa . it will be a great stepping stone for people to get close.

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Jean



[ESSAY]
In 3-5 sentences, answer the question below:

>> What are some countries that you would never visit? Why would you not visit them?

Take note of the following words:

1. stepping stone
2. productive

i m not sure..

>> I don\'t know for certain.


 if i pick some countries that i would never visit , it might be africa area.  africa is really far from my country.

>> If I pick some countries that I would never visit, it might be the African region as it\'s very far from my home nation.


so if i want to go there ,i should take some planes for at least 20hours.

>> So if I wanted to go there, I would have to take at least a 20-hour flight. 


 but if someone invent technology to make faster and productive planes , i might be able to go africa .

>> However, if someone invented a technology to make faster and more productive planes, I would be able to go to Africa. 


 it will be a great stepping stone for people to get close.

>> It will be a great stepping stone for people to become closer.

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