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What is the importance of eating healthy food?
We have to eat healthy foods because we can stay strong and healthy.
There are fruits, vegtables, meat, fish and grains.
Fruits and vegtables have vitamin.
Meat and fish have protein.
Grains have low fat.
We also have to drink water because we\'re body is full of water.
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We have to eat healthy foods because we can stay strong and healthy.
>>> We have to eat healthy food to be strong and healthy.
There are fruits, vegtables, meat, fish and grains.
>>> CORRECT!
Fruits and vegtables have vitamin.
>>> CORRECT!
Meat and fish have protein.
>>> CORRECT!
Grains have low fat.
>>> CORRECT!
>>> OR: Grains are low in fat.
We also have to drink water because we\'re body is full of water.
>>> We also have to drink water because our body should be full of it.
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