H.W 1,2

2017-11-10 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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H.W1 Q. Tell me about your greatest challenge you were up against and how you overcame it. A. When I was in the army, needed an interpreter in haste as the US troops visited the unit. I boldly apply for the interpreter and practiced the military terms and sentences throughout the day. On the day the US Army arrived, I did well at first, but I had difficulty in translating work becasue of unexpected questions. Although I did not do it perfectly, I think I have done well and overcome it. H.W2 1. Gary and ( I ) have decided to become Pat Boone imitators. 2. The victims are (them). 3. (We) actuaries are going to run away and join the World Wrestling Federation. 4. The cause is unquestionably (her). 5. Madness takes (its) toll. Please have exact change. 6. Her kisses left something to be desired -the rest of (her). 7. Human beings, (who) are almost unique in having the ability to learn from the experience of others, are also remarkable for their apparent disinclinati

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

Thank you so much for doing your homework!

I appreciate your effort. Kindly check the corrections I made below.

See you later!

~Teacher Shanee^^,

H.W1
Q. Tell me about your greatest challenge you were up against and how you overcame it.

A. When I was in the army, needed an interpreter in haste as the US troops visited the unit.

>>> When I was in the army, they were in haste to find an interpreter because the US troops visited the unit.

I boldly apply for the interpreter and practiced the military terms and sentences throughout the day.

>>> I boldly applied as an interpreter and practiced the military terms and sentences throughout the day.

On the day the US Army arrived, I did well at first, but I had difficulty in translating work becasue of unexpected questions.

>>> On the day the US Army arrived, I did well at first but I had difficulty in translating words because of some unexpected questions.

Although I did not do it perfectly, I think I have done well and overcome it.

>>> Correct!

H.W2
1. Gary and ( I ) have decided to become Pat Boone imitators.
>>> Correct!
2. The victims are (them).
>>> The victims are they. [technically correct]
3. (We) actuaries are going to run away and join the World Wrestling Federation.
>>> Correct!
4. The cause is unquestionably (her).
>>> The cause is unquestionably she. [technically correct]
5. Madness takes (its) toll. Please have exact change.
>>> Correct!
6. Her kisses left something to be desired -the rest of (her).
>>> Correct!
7. Human beings, (who) are almost unique in having the ability to learn from the experience of others, are also remarkable for their apparent disinclinati

>>> Correct!

8 Sam and I heard that the Internal Revenue Service wants to improve its image; they will no longer answer the phone with \'Next victim,\' and a new mascot, Timmy the Tax Collector, will replace the Grim Reaper.

9. The only difference between me and a madman is that I am not mad.

10. Those who make peaceful revolution impossible will make violent revolution inevitable.

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