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I attatched the homework.
Plz check this.
I always thank you for your teaching.
Have a nice day.🤩
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Hi, Stella! I believe that whatever hardships we experience in life, everything will be all right in the end. ^^ Fighting! Have a great weekend!
~T. Jewel
When I\'m not feeling well, I usually focus on the other topic.
>>When I\'m not feeling well, I usually focus on something else.
In a way, I might run away far from the problems.
In a way, I might run away far from the problems.
>>In a way, it\'s like running far away from the problems.
Sometimes, I sleep or watch a drama or talk with my friends, etc.
Sometimes, I sleep or watch a drama or talk with my friends, etc.
>>Sometimes, I sleep, watch a drama, or talk with my friends.
After time goes by, like this, I think about the problems or the topics.
After time goes by, like this, I think about the problems or the topics.
> As time goes by, I think about the problems or issues.
And then it is not important thing anymore most of case.
>>And then, it’s no longer important in most cases.
But, I might feel more painful.
But, I might feel more painful.
>>But, I might feel more pain.
It just delay the judgement.
It just delay the judgement.
>>It just delays the judgment.
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