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HOMEWORK:
What time of the day do you most enjoy eating? Why?
When I am a hungry, I tend to eat very fast.
In lunch time, I alway eat fast in my office because there is not a cafeteria like convenience store in my office.
Most Korean company have the cafeteria like convenience store.
So I can\'t enjoy eating lunch and I always am hungry in the afternoon.
I enjoy eating when I eat foods with my family.
Despite insipid foods, it is not important.
I think together is very important to eat.
Because nowadays we are very busy so I can\'t meet often.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for the compositions today! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
In lunch time, I alway eat fast in my office because there is not a cafeteria like convenience store in my office.
In lunch time, I alway eat fast in my office because there is not a cafeteria like convenience store in my office.
>>At lunch time, I always eat fast in my office because there is not a cafeteria like convenience stores in my office.
Most Korean company have the cafeteria like convenience store.
Most Korean company have the cafeteria like convenience store.
>>Most Korean companies have cafeterias like convenience stores.
So I can\'t enjoy eating lunch and I always am hungry in the afternoon.
So I can\'t enjoy eating lunch and I always am hungry in the afternoon.
>>CORRECT!
I enjoy eating when I eat foods with my family.
I enjoy eating when I eat foods with my family.
>>CORRECT!
Despite insipid foods, it is not important.
Despite insipid foods, it is not important.
>>CORRECT!
I think together is very important to eat.
I think together is very important to eat.
>>I think eating together is very important.
Because nowadays we are very busy so I can\'t meet often.
Because nowadays we are very busy so I can\'t meet often.
>>CORRECT!
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