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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi~
If I could be famous, I want to be famous a traveler.
In my case, I am afraid to go to a new place so I want to visit a lot of countries along.
I also want to speak many language of countries.
If I would be famous, I will be proud of myself.
Can you correct the wrong sentences in class right away?
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Sure! I will correct you right away when you make a mistake ^^. See you later in class.
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
In my case, I am afraid to go to a new place so I want to visit a lot of countries along.
In my case, I am afraid to go to a new place so I want to visit a lot of countries along.
>>In my case, I am afraid to go to new places so I want to visit a lot of countries along the way.
I also want to speak many language of countries.
I also want to speak many language of countries.
>>I also want to speak many languages of different countries.
If I would be famous, I will be proud of myself.
If I would be famous, I will be proud of myself.
>>If I could be famous, I will be proud of myself.
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