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2020-09-15 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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I have been to U.S.A. and Canada and Philippines and Thailand. When I went to Philippines and Thailand, I was very young so I can\'t remember well but U.S.A. and Canada were very exciting and fun.

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Hello [이름]!

You did your homework early, congratulations!

I am sad that you cannot remember what you did in the Philippines but I am very happy that you shared this experience of your travel to other countries. Tomorrow prepare to tell me what you did in Canada and USA. 

Thank you for answering my question. Well done! 

-T. Donna =)

I have been to U.S.A. and Canada and Philippines and Thailand. When I went to Philippines and Thailand, I was very young so I can\'t remember well but U.S.A. and Canada were very exciting and fun.
>> I have been to U.S.A., Canada, Philippines, and Thailand. When I went to the Philippines and Thailand, I was very young so I can\'t remember them well. But U.S.A. and Canada were very exciting and fun.

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