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2020-09-21 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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In my opinion, public transportation is very important because public transportation is the best transportation for people who don\'t have a driving license.

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Hello [이름]! 

You are right. Basically, in many countries, people do not have a car so public transportation is a necessity. Likewise, not owning a car minimizes pollution.

Thank you for telling what you think here on your sentence. I will see you in class later.

-T. Donna =)

In my opinion, public transportation is very important because public transportation is the best transportation for people who don\'t have a driving license.
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Or>> In my opinion, public transportation is very important because it is the best transportation for people who don\'t have a driving license.

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