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학생이 쓴 원문
These days, many not using english countries\' people want to learn to speak English.
They have many reasons.
First, English is the languege that most countries use.
Second, English is one essential thing of business.
Third, learning foreign languages can give many opportunities.
In these reasons, many people want to learn english.
강사 첨삭
You are absolutely correct [이름]!
English has been the language not only of education but also of business.
I hope that you will be able to use English in both purpose.
See you!
-T. Donna
>> These days, many people from non-English countries want to learn to speak English.
They have many reasons.
>> Correct!
First, English is the languege that most countries use.
>> Correct! Or: language
Second, English is one essential thing of business.
>> Second, English is one essential thing for business.
Third, learning foreign languages can give many opportunities.
>> Correct!
In these reasons, many people want to learn english.
>> Correct! Or: English
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