H.W.
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was young, I saw a musical named Wicked with my mom.
The musical was so showy so I fell into the musical.
So I think this musical is the best art work that I have ever seen in Korea.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Happy new week.
What a wickedly wonderful musical indeed. I have seen some musical but not quite as what you have witnessed. For me, it depends on the performance. It does not matter if I have seen it in You Tube or anywhere for as long as I feel the art in my heart, that is beautiful art.
See you in class in a few hours.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
The musical was so showy so I fell into the musical.
>> The musical was so (magnificent/spectacular/amazing) so I fell in love with the musical.
So I think this musical is the best art work that I have ever seen in Korea.
>> Correct!
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