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My latest achievement is that I got the IELTS points.
I need the points because the points are a compulsory thing to enter the colleague.
And I really really studied hard for 9 months and I got the points.
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Hi [이름]!
Working smart and patiently absolutely pays off. So keep up the good work always.
Thanks for being responsible and accountable in doing your homework.
Catch you soon.
-T. Donna =)
>> My latest achievement is that I got my target IELTS points.
I need the points because the points are a compulsory thing to enter the colleague.
>> I need the points because it is compulsory in entering college.
And I really really studied hard for 9 months and I got the points.
>> And I really studied hard for 9 months to get the points.
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