H.W.
학생이 쓴 원문
There are many reasons that make a vice. I think the most common reason is their circumstance.
If they have violent parents, they will be violent. So when they are young if they experienced the vice many times, they will do the vice in the future.
강사 첨삭
Happy new week [이름]!
Congratulations for perfecting the grammar of your homework for tonight.
Indeed, exposure to violence leads children to more cases. So avoid it when you can.
See you in class later.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
If they have violent parents, they will be violent. So when they are young if they experienced the vice many times, they will do the vice in the future.
>> Correct!
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