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2020-10-14 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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When I was young, I did steel snacks at the small store in front of my school. But I was caught by the man who the owner of the store. So I very ashamed and I have a shame today.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

Past is past. If you will not repeat this, you are good enough.

See you in class.

-T. Donna =)

When I was young, I did steel snacks at the small store in front of my school.
>> Correct!
Or>> steal 

But I was caught by the man who the owner of the store.
>> But I was caught by the man who owns the store.

So I very ashamed and I have a shame today.
>> So I\'m very ashamed that day until today.

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