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I didn\'t know the place that has the lowest crime rate.
So I searched that on google. Google said Jinan is the lowest area in Korea.
I don\'t know I have been there but I think Jinan has a low number of people so their crime rate is low.
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Thanks for this answer [이름]!
Jinan is lucky to have a low crime rate. So it means that more people, more chances of committing crime. Always be careful in crowded places.
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-T. Donna =)
>> I don\'t know the place that has the lowest crime rate.
So I searched that on google. Google said Jinan is the lowest area in Korea.
>> So I searched that on Google. Google said Jinan has the lowest crime rate in Korea.
I don\'t know I have been there but I think Jinan has a low number of people so their crime rate is low.
>> I don\'t know if I have been there but I think Jinan has a low number of people so their crime rate is low.
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