H.W.
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, white lies are good for someone. It discovered through several studies.
The studies showed that patient who has a disease that couldn\'t care was getting better by white lies.
For this reason, I think white lies are not bad, it can help someone.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
I agree with you. For as long as there is a positive result, then, white lies are accepted.
See you later in a few.
-T. Donna =)
>> In my opinion, white lies are good for someone. It has been discovered through several studies.
The studies showed that patient who has a disease that couldn\'t care was getting better by white lies.
>> The studies showed that a patient who has a disease who couldn\'t care was getting better by white lies.
For this reason, I think white lies are not bad, it can help someone.
>> Correct!
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