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2020-10-19 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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I enjoy eating alone because eating alone is more comfortable than eating with someone. And if I eat a meal with someone, I have to think about what one wants to eat but when I eat alone, I can choose what I want to eat. Moreover, when I eat with someone, I can\'t eat as much as I want. For these reasons, I prefer eating alone than eating with another one.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

When I was younger and even today that I\'m already older, I always prefer to eat with someone. At times when I want to think, I want to be just by myself.

Either way, I enjoy both depending on the situation.

I hope you can enjoy eating with others and choosing food with them as well in time.

See you later in class.

-T. Donna =)

I enjoy eating alone because eating alone is more comfortable than eating with someone.
>> Correct!

And if I eat a meal with someone, I have to think about what one wants to eat but when I eat alone, I can choose what I want to eat.
>> Correct!

Moreover, when I eat with someone, I can\'t eat as much as I want.
>> Correct!

For these reasons, I prefer eating alone than eating with another one.
>> Correct!

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