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2020-10-19 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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I think they should have at least two vacations a week. Because if they have just one vacation a week, they can\'t take a rest. The feeling same with the feeling that we feel nervous on Sunday. So they must have over two vacations a week.

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I think they should have at least two vacations a week.
>> I think they should have at least a two-day vacations a week.

Because if they have just one vacation a week, they can\'t take a rest.
>> If they have just one vacation a week, they can\'t take a rest.

The feeling same with the feeling that we feel nervous on Sunday.
>> The feeling is the same with the feeling when we feel nervous on Sunday.

So they must have over two vacations a week.
>> Correct!

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