H.W.
학생이 쓴 원문
When I had stress, I did try to sleep.
Because sleeping can help to forget all about stress and makes me calm down.
However, sleeping is hard when I got stress so usually, I just lie on my bed and think about good things.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon [이름]!
Sleeping is the way we charge ourselves from long day of work and activities. If we cannot sleep, that only means that we have a lot of things to think about and we think we still do not need to sleep.
So, do well what you need to and sleep when you have to.
See you later!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Because sleeping can help to forget all about stress and makes me calm down.
>> Sleeping can help to forget all about stress and makes me calm down.
However, sleeping is hard when I got stress so usually, I just lie on my bed and think about good things.
>> However, sleeping is hard when I get stressed so usually, I just lie on my bed and think about good things.
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