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학생이 쓴 원문
There are many ways when you relieve someone\'s stress.
I will recommend one way of many ways that relieve someone\'s stress.
It is listening to someone\'s problems.
A study showed up that telling their problems helps to relieve stress.
I think this way is the easiest way of all of the ways.
For example, a man who wanted to kill himself talked about his problems and causes of stress to a stranger, and the stranger just listened to his story.
After that, the man who wanted to die could be calm down, and the stranger saved his life.
For these reasons, I argue that listening to someone\'s problem is an important way to relieve stress.
강사 첨삭
Unarguably, listening is a therapy for some people.
If you noticed, older people just need someone to talk to, someone who will listen to them as people had become so busy, no one really cares anymore.
Well, a good listener learns a lot from others.
Thanks for drafting your answer to my question [이름].
See you in class!
-T. Donna =)
>>There are many ways when you can relieve someone\'s stress.
I will recommend one way of many ways that relieve someone\'s stress.
>> I will recommend one of the many ways that can relieve someone\'s stress.
It is listening to someone\'s problems.
>> Correct!
A study showed up that telling their problems helps to relieve stress.
>> A study showed that telling problems helps to relieve stress.
I think this way is the easiest way of all of the ways.
>> Correct!
For example, a man who wanted to kill himself talked about his problems and causes of stress to a stranger, and the stranger just listened to his story.
>> Correct!
After that, the man who wanted to die could be calm down, and the stranger saved his life.
>>After that, the man who wanted to die could calm down, and the stranger saved his life.
For these reasons, I argue that listening to someone\'s problem is an important way to relieve stress.
>> Correct!
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