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2020-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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I like to play sports but I\'m not playing well and after this pandemic, I couldn\'t play sports. My favorite sport is soccer but I\'m not a good soccer player and the sport that I\'m best at is basketball. Last year, I got the top point in basketball in my class.

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday [이름]!

Sports keep us fit, alert, and competitive. If you learn these values, then life is actually a big sports of all sorts. Do well and I hope you win in most parts of it.

See you in class!

-T. Donna =)

I like to play sports but I\'m not playing well and after this pandemic, I couldn\'t play sports.
>> Correct!

My favorite sport is soccer but I\'m not a good soccer player and the sport that I\'m best at is basketball.
>> My favorite sports is soccer but I\'m not a good soccer player and the sports that I\'m best at is basketball.

Last year, I got the top point in basketball in my class.
>> Correct!

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