H.W.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think I\'m good at talking to someone so I think my ideal job is about talking.
Sometimes my friends recommended a pseudo religious sect leader.
But I don\'t like to hurt people so my ideal job is a lawyer because I\'m good at persuading.
강사 첨삭
[이름], hello there!
I agree that you must be a lawyer to defend the truth and justice someday.
See you tomorrow.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Sometimes my friends recommended a pseudo religious sect leader.
>> Correct!
But I don\'t like to hurt people so my ideal job is a lawyer because I\'m good at persuading.
>>But I don\'t like to hurt people so my ideal job is to be a lawyer because I\'m good at persuading.
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