H.W.
학생이 쓴 원문
My most important gadget is my phone because my phone makes me more comfortable and happier.
It can connect me with someone and can check many things like weather, news, the temperature in my room.
In other words, my life is always with a smart phone.
So my phone is the most important gadget for me.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
The smartphone or android is a very powerful gadget as it can do almost everything the lap top can do for us. At times, we even sleep together with it because it can easily be of reach when we have to check things from the internet.
Use your phone wisely and efficiently always.
See you later in class.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
It can connect me with someone and can check many things like weather, news, the temperature in my room.
>>It can connect me with someone and can check many things like the weather, news, and the temperature in my room.
In other words, my life is always with a smart phone.
>> Correct!
So my phone is the most important gadget for me.
>> Correct!
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