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학생이 쓴 원문
When I was really young, I went to a bathhouse with my father.
I was a mischievous boy so I thought a fun.
That was that I hit my father\'s hip so I hit his hip but he was not my father.
At that time, I was very shameful so I didn\'t apologize to him.
So if I can meet him again, I want to apologize to him.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
This seems like a hilarious movie scene to me. This only proves that you were a naughty child.
I hope you remember the face of that man because you cannot absolutely see that hips again.
See you in class.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
I was a mischievous boy so I thought a fun.
>> I was a mischievous boy so I thought of having some fun.
That was that I hit my father\'s hip so I hit his hip but he was not my father.
>> I thought of hitting my father\'s hip so I hit his hip but he was not my father.
At that time, I was very shameful so I didn\'t apologize to him.
>> At that time, I felt very shameful so I didn\'t apologize to him.
So if I can meet him again, I want to apologize to him.
>> Correct!
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