h/w
학생이 쓴 원문
Would you mind taking my medicine in kitchen.
Hello. I'd like to talk to Mr. [Name], please.
We intend visiting to the new offices in June.
I don't remember to tell him to cancel the meeting.
I want to learn to speak English.
There weren't drama broadcasting for a month such as "Gossip girl", "Mentalist", "Castle", and "House". Finally, they become broadcasting from this week on. I've been waited this week since last month. "Gossip girl" is broadcasted on Tuesday. I couldn't wait for Korean subtitle. Thus I watched "Gossip girl" without Korean subtitle. To be honest, I couldn't listen most of dialogues. However I could understand situations. Some part was ridiculous but most of mood about this episode was very sad. I was almost cry. I usually watched "Gossip girl" more than five times. Maybe I'll feel little bit blue until next broadcasting if mood of nest episode will be happy.
강사 첨삭
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-Teacher Chloe
Would you mind taking my medicine in kitchen.
>>CorrectHello. I\'d like to talk to Mr. [Name], please.
>>Correct
>> Hello. I\'d like talking to Mr. [Name], please.We intend visiting to the new offices in June.
>>CorrectI don\'t remember to tell him to cancel the meeting.
>> I don\'t remember him to cancelling the meeting.I want to learn to speak English.
>>Correct
>>I want learning to speak English.There weren\'t drama broadcasting for a month such as \"Gossip girl\", \"Mentalist\", \"Castle\", and \"House\".
>> There weren\'t drama broadcasting for a month such as \"Gossip girl\", \"Mentalist\", \"Castle\" and \"House\".
Finally, they become broadcasting from this week on.
>>Finally, they are will be broadcast again starting this week.
I\'ve been waited this week since last month.
>>I\'ve been waiting for this week since last month.
\"Gossip girl\" is broadcasted on Tuesday.
>>\"Gossip girl\" will be shown again on Tuesday.
I couldn\'t wait for Korean subtitle.
>>Correct
Thus I watched \"Gossip girl\" without Korean subtitle.
>>Thus, I will be watching \"Gossip girl\" without Korean subtitle.
To be honest, I couldn\'t listen most of dialogues.
>>Honestly, I couldn\'t understand most of the dialogues.
However I could understand situations.
>>However, I could understand the story.
Some part was ridiculous but most of mood about this episode was very sad.
>> Some part is ridiculous and most of the moods are very sad.
I was almost cry.
>>I almost cried.
I usually watched \"Gossip girl\" more than five times.
>> I usually watch \"Gossip girl\". I was able to watch for more than five times now.
Maybe I\'ll feel little bit blue until next broadcasting if mood of nest episode will be happy.
>> Maybe I\'ll feel little bit blue until it will be shown but I will be happy to see the next episode.
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