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2012-01-20 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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I don't like smoking./How many languages do you know?/Where do you stay?/What did you do at the park?/I don't believe that you are a CEO. I am doing my work now. Do not disturb me./She likes cooking food daily./I'll write a letter tomorrow./I have been studying in this school for ten years./I took the pen before she did. I have aches and pains all over now. Because I took a rattled bus for 2 hours to meet my friends yesterday. The small and rattled bus drove down an unpaved road. It made my waist pain. Besides, I slept wrong because my neck hurt. And one more thing, I put on my 3cm heeled shoes yesterday. Almost I wore sneakers. I put on heeled shoes once a month. Thus my ankle was stressed. So my ankle muscles are tensed up now. If I exercised regularly, I wouldn't feel pains.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Good job again for you answers!  Anyway, as what I told you ENJOY YOUR LUNAR NEW YEAR DAY! HAVE FUN MY DEAR!  I will talk to you again on Wednesday! -Teacher Chloe     I don\'t like smoking. >>Correct How many languages do you know? >>Correct Where do you stay? >>Correct What did you do at the park? >>Correct I don\'t believe that you are a CEO. >>CorrectI am doing my work now. >>Correct Do not disturb me. >>Correct She likes cooking food daily. >>Correct I\'ll write a letter tomorrow. >>Correct I have been studying in this school for ten years. >>Correct I took the pen before she did. >>CorrectI have aches and pains all over now. >>I have muscle pains right now. Because I took a rattled bus for 2 hours to meet my friends yesterday. >>Beause I rode a bus for two hours to meet my friends yesterday. The small and rattled bus drove down an unpaved road. >>The bus took zig-zag roads. It made my waist pain. >>Which made my waist painful. Besides, I slept wrong because my neck hurt. >>Also, I slept in a wrong position.And one more thing, I put on my 3cm heeled shoes yesterday. >>I even used my high-heeled shoes. Almost I wore sneakers. >>I usually wear sneaker shoes. I put on heeled shoes once a month. >I am using high heels once a month. Thus my ankle was stressed. So my ankle muscles are tensed up now. >>My ankles still hurt. If I exercised regularly, I wouldn\'t feel pains. >>If I will do exercise probably I did not feel any pain.

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