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학생이 쓴 원문
I don't like smoking./How many languages do you know?/Where do you stay?/What did you do at the park?/I don't believe that you are a CEO.
I am doing my work now. Do not disturb me./She likes cooking food daily./I'll write a letter tomorrow./I have been studying in this school for ten years./I took the pen before she did.
I have aches and pains all over now. Because I took a rattled bus for 2 hours to meet my friends yesterday. The small and rattled bus drove down an unpaved road. It made my waist pain. Besides, I slept wrong because my neck hurt.
And one more thing, I put on my 3cm heeled shoes yesterday. Almost I wore sneakers. I put on heeled shoes once a month. Thus my ankle was stressed. So my ankle muscles are tensed up now. If I exercised regularly, I wouldn't feel pains.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Good job again for you answers! Anyway, as what I told you ENJOY YOUR LUNAR NEW YEAR DAY! HAVE FUN MY DEAR! I will talk to you again on Wednesday!
-Teacher Chloe
I don\'t like smoking.
>>Correct
How many languages do you know?
>>Correct
Where do you stay?
>>Correct
What did you do at the park?
>>Correct
I don\'t believe that you are a CEO.
>>CorrectI am doing my work now.
>>Correct
Do not disturb me.
>>Correct
She likes cooking food daily.
>>Correct
I\'ll write a letter tomorrow.
>>Correct
I have been studying in this school for ten years.
>>Correct
I took the pen before she did.
>>CorrectI have aches and pains all over now.
>>I have muscle pains right now.
Because I took a rattled bus for 2 hours to meet my friends yesterday.
>>Beause I rode a bus for two hours to meet my friends yesterday.
The small and rattled bus drove down an unpaved road.
>>The bus took zig-zag roads.
It made my waist pain.
>>Which made my waist painful.
Besides, I slept wrong because my neck hurt.
>>Also, I slept in a wrong position.And one more thing, I put on my 3cm heeled shoes yesterday.
>>I even used my high-heeled shoes.
Almost I wore sneakers.
>>I usually wear sneaker shoes.
I put on heeled shoes once a month.
>I am using high heels once a month.
Thus my ankle was stressed. So my ankle muscles are tensed up now.
>>My ankles still hurt.
If I exercised regularly, I wouldn\'t feel pains.
>>If I will do exercise probably I did not feel any pain.
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