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학생이 쓴 원문
1. Look! The boy climbs the hill.
2. The bus had arrived before I reached the bus-stop.
3. You should always eat healthy food.
4. I will visit my grandmother next week.
5. She caught them while they were talking
I have a lot of work before leaving Korea. But I don't want to work. Today I applied for inssurance of Czech. For recieving VISA, I had to apply for inssurance of Czech. It was complicate!
Thesedays, I think I don't wanna go to the Czech republic. I just want to take a rest for a long time. I don't expect about days in Czech. I'm worried about days in Czech. Maybe I'm scared for leaving Korea.
강사 첨삭
Hello my dear Isabel! Here are my corrections for your composition. Anyway, I think you have a problem. Take it easy baby. Just relax. We will talk about it on our class. Okay? Talk you later my dear.
-Teacher Chloe
Look! The boy climbs the hill.
>> Look! The boy is climbing the hill.The bus had arrived before I reached the bus-stop.
>>CorrectYou should always eat healthy food.
>>CorrectI will visit my grandmother next week.
>>CorrectShe caught them while they were talking
>>CorrectI have a lot of work before leaving Korea.
>>I have a lot of work to do before leaving Korea.
But I don\'t want to work.
>>But I don't want to do it.
Today I applied for inssurance of Czech.
>>I applied for an insurance in Czech.
For recieving VISA, I had to apply for inssurance of Czech.
>>So, I can receive a Visa.
It was complicate!
>>It is complicated.Thesedays, I think I don\'t wanna go to the Czech republic.
>>These days, I am thinking not to go to Czech Republic anymore.
I just want to take a rest for a long time.
>>Correct
>>I just want to take a rest.
I don\'t expect about days in Czech.
>>I don't even think about my days in Czech anymore.
I\'m worried about days in Czech. Maybe I\'m scared for leaving Korea.
>>I am really worried. I am afraid in leaving Korea.
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