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2012-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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I'm not particularly good at sports./He's ill so he's at home today./Can I borrow a pen from you, please?/Everything depends on you./Oxford is famous for its universities./Do you enjoy your holiday in Italy?/I saw a great film on TV last night./How old were you when you started your first job?/Do you (see) your doctor last weekend?-> I don't know./How do you make your homework?/ Hello, Chloe. Actually I usually had a homework about myself before I have a class with you. For example of my homework, my favorite color, my favorite season, my embarrassing experience, my ideal place, my favorite movie, just like that. I loved my homework and I wanted homework like this way. So I often wrote compositions during our class. But I couldn't upload my compositions. Because I was worried if you don't interested in my composition and you don't want to share my experience. But now, I know you don't mind sharing my compositions. I think I was too timid and shy. I'm sorry for that.

강사 첨삭

Hello Isabel! GREAT JOB MY DEAR!  Anyway, I will talk to you later about your compostition my dear. Just seat back and relax my dear. -Teacher Chloe   I\'m not particularly good at sports. >>Correct He\'s ill so he\'s at home today. >>Correct Can I borrow a pen from you, please? >>Correct Everything depends on you. >>Correct Oxford is famous for its universities. >>Correct Do you enjoy your holiday in Italy? >>Did you enjoy your holiday in Italy? I saw a great film on TV last night. >>Correct How old were you when you started your first job? >>Correct Do you (see) your doctor last weekend? I don\'t know. >>Did you see your doctor last weekend? How do you make your homework? >> How did you make your homework? Hello, Chloe. >>Correct  Actually I usually had a homework about myself before I have a class with you.>> Actually I usually had homeworks about myself before I had class with you. For example of my homework, my favorite color, my favorite season, my embarrassing experience, my ideal place, my favorite movie, just like that. >>My homeworks was all about my favorite color; my favorite season; my embarrasing moment; my ideal place; my favorite movie and so forth and so on.    I loved my homework and I wanted homework like this way. >>I love doing homeworks and I want homework like this. So I often wrote compositions during our class. >>So I can write compositions.  But I couldn\'t upload my compositions. >>Correct Because I was worried if you don\'t interested in my composition and you don\'t want to share my experience. >>I was worried because you might find my compositions uninteresting and I was thinking that you don't probably like me sharing my experiences. But now, I know you don\'t mind sharing my compositions. >>Correct  I think I was too timid and shy. >>Correct  I\'m sorry for that. >>Correct  

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