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2012-01-31 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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I refuse to pay anything (until) you do the work properly. You look (while) you haven't eaten for a week. I came early (so that) I could talk to you privately. I don't mind if you go out for lunch (as if) you're back for the meeting at two. Are you OK? You look (while) you have a problem. Hello, Chloe! I got a first e-mail from my buddy in Praha. She'll be helping me to adjust to living in Praha. I wanted to reply immediately, but I had a no idea at that time. Maybe I'll send a e-mail like this. <Sample> Hello. I´m happy that you are my buddy. And thank you for sending a e-mail. I'm surprised that you can use Korean. I was so glad when I read “안녕” which you wrote. I was wondering about the way of class. I heard almost class in MPU is composed of seminar and presentation. Is that true? Take care. I'll send a e-mail to her tomorrow. Wow, so I have a tomorrow plan after a long time.

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Hello [이름]! Good job!  Here are my corrections. Please check it out. Anyway, I will talk to you later my dear. Just seat back and relax. -Teacher Chloe  I refuse to pay anything (until) you do the work properly. >> I refuse to pay anything until you do the work properly. You look (while) you haven\'t eaten for a week. >> You look as if you haven\'t eaten for a week.I came early so that I could talk to you privately. >> I came early (so that) I could talk to you privately. I don\'t mind if you go out for lunch (as if) you\'re back for the meeting at two. >> I don\'t mind if you go out for lunch as long as you\'re back for the meeting at two. Are you OK? You look (while) you have a problem. >> Are you OK? You look as if you have a problem.Hello, Chloe! >>Correct I got a first e-mail from my buddy in Praha. >> I got the first e-mail from my buddy in Praha. She\'ll be helping me to adjust to living in Praha. >> She\'ll be helping me to adjust living in Praha. I wanted to reply immediately, but I had a no idea at that time. >>I wanted to reply immediately but I have no idea at this time.  Maybe I\'ll send a e-mail like this. >>Probably, I will send an email like this.<Sample>Hello. >>Correct I´m happy that you are my buddy. >>I am happy to have you as my buddy. >> I am happy to have you as my friend. And thank you for sending a e-mail. >> And thank you for sending an e-mail. I\'m surprised that you can use Korean. >> I\'m surprised because you know how to use our language. I was so glad when I read “안녕” which you wrote. >>I was so glad when I read your message. I was wondering about the way of class. >>I am wondering about the kind of class. I heard almost class in MPU is composed of seminar and presentation. >> I heard that almost classes in MPU are composed of seminars and presentations. Is that true? Take care. >>CorrectI\'ll send a e-mail to her tomorrow. >>I\'ll send her an email tomorrow. Wow, so I have a tomorrow plan after a long time. >>Wow, so I already have plan.  

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