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I refuse to pay anything (until) you do the work properly.
You look (while) you haven't eaten for a week.
I came early (so that) I could talk to you privately.
I don't mind if you go out for lunch (as if) you're back for the meeting at two.
Are you OK? You look (while) you have a problem.
Hello, Chloe! I got a first e-mail from my buddy in Praha. She'll be helping me to adjust to living in Praha. I wanted to reply immediately, but I had a no idea at that time. Maybe I'll send a e-mail like this.
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Hello. I´m happy that you are my buddy. And thank you for sending a e-mail. I'm surprised that you can use Korean. I was so glad when I read “안녕” which you wrote. I was wondering about the way of class. I heard almost class in MPU is composed of seminar and presentation. Is that true? Take care.
I'll send a e-mail to her tomorrow. Wow, so I have a tomorrow plan after a long time.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Good job! Here are my corrections. Please check it out. Anyway, I will talk to you later my dear. Just seat back and relax.
-Teacher Chloe
I refuse to pay anything (until) you do the work properly.
>> I refuse to pay anything until you do the work properly.
You look (while) you haven\'t eaten for a week.
>> You look as if you haven\'t eaten for a week.I came early so that I could talk to you privately.
>> I came early (so that) I could talk to you privately.
I don\'t mind if you go out for lunch (as if) you\'re back for the meeting at two.
>> I don\'t mind if you go out for lunch as long as you\'re back for the meeting at two.
Are you OK? You look (while) you have a problem.
>> Are you OK? You look as if you have a problem.Hello, Chloe!
>>Correct
I got a first e-mail from my buddy in Praha.
>> I got the first e-mail from my buddy in Praha.
She\'ll be helping me to adjust to living in Praha.
>> She\'ll be helping me to adjust living in Praha.
I wanted to reply immediately, but I had a no idea at that time.
>>I wanted to reply immediately but I have no idea at this time.
Maybe I\'ll send a e-mail like this.
>>Probably, I will send an email like this.<Sample>Hello.
>>Correct
I´m happy that you are my buddy.
>>I am happy to have you as my buddy.
>> I am happy to have you as my friend.
And thank you for sending a e-mail.
>> And thank you for sending an e-mail.
I\'m surprised that you can use Korean.
>> I\'m surprised because you know how to use our language.
I was so glad when I read “안녕” which you wrote.
>>I was so glad when I read your message.
I was wondering about the way of class.
>>I am wondering about the kind of class.
I heard almost class in MPU is composed of seminar and presentation.
>> I heard that almost classes in MPU are composed of seminars and presentations.
Is that true? Take care.
>>CorrectI\'ll send a e-mail to her tomorrow.
>>I\'ll send her an email tomorrow.
Wow, so I have a tomorrow plan after a long time.
>>Wow, so I already have plan.
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