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2012-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Here is my homework. There's a new cinema in town. Are you there yet? I'm ready to go. Are you finished yet? Susie isn't here. She went to the shops for some bread. You have a great suntan, Sally. Are you on holiday? Hello, Chloe. I sent an e-mail to my buddy yesterday. I'm not still realized that I'm going to the Czech republic. I think I'm in dream. I'll have to buy career, clothes, medicines before go to the airport. Also I'll have to exchange money. And I'll go to the embassy for receiving my Visa. So today, I searched for a career. So many kind of career in the world. I couldn't choice one of them. I had to consider about too many things like size, price, durability, after service. Every step to go to the Czech republic is hard. Anyway, I paid for camera with my mother's credit card on the Internet shoppong mall today. Thus I didn't receive my camera yet. Maybe I'll meet my camera next Thursday. I can't wait!

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Hello [이름]! Here are my corrections dear. Please check it out and be mindful with the corrections. Anyway, I am really happy for you because finally you will have your own camera soon! WOW! So, you should be very happy now. Okay? So, just seat back and relax for now if you are not busy. -Teacher Chloe Here is my homework.There\'s a new cinema in town. Are you there yet? >>There\'s a new cinema in town. Have you been there yet?I\'m ready to go. Are you finished yet? >> I\'m ready to go. Have you finished yet?Susie isn\'t here. She went to the shops for some bread. >> Susie isn\'t here. She has gone to the shops for some bread.You have a great suntan, Sally. Are you on holiday? >> You have a great suntan, Sally, have you been on holiday?Hello, Chloe. >>CorrectI sent an e-mail to my buddy yesterday. >>Correct I\'m not still realized that I\'m going to the Czech republic. >>I couldn\'t still think that I will be going to Czech Republic. I think I\'m in dream. >>I think that I am only dreaming. >>I feel like I am only dreaming. I\'ll have to buy career, clothes, medicines before go to the airport. >>I will have to buy clothes and medicines before leaving. Also I\'ll have to exchange money.  >>Also, I have to bring Czech currency as my pocket money. And I\'ll go to the embassy for receiving my Visa. >>And I will go to the embassy to receive my visa.So today, I searched for a career. >>So today, I started searching for a job. So many kind of career in the world. >>I was able to see a lot of jobs in the world.  I couldn\'t choice one of them. >>I couldn\'t choose one.  I had to consider about too many things like size, price, durability, after service. >>I have to consider many things like wage and stability of the work.  Every step to go to the Czech republic is hard. >>I think every step that I will take in going to Czech is hard.Anyway, I paid for camera with my mother\'s credit card on the Internet shoppong mall today. >>Anyway, I already paid a camera on online shopping with my mom\'s credit card.  Thus I didn\'t receive my camera yet. >>But I haven\'t received it yet. Maybe I\'ll meet my camera next Thursday. I can\'t wait! >>Maybe, I will have it tomorrow. I can\'t wait!  

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