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2012-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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I found video about cute cat in the youtube. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F-_EOxPlpfg This vedio is hot issue on the Korean web site. The cat in this video crossed his legs like human. I'm used watching video about cute cat before I had a cat. I saw a picture about ambulance in a abroad. And I found the letter of ambulance is reversed. The reason why the letter of ambulance is reversed is for drivers and patient. Drivers who drive in front of a ambulance can see the spells of "Ambulance" correctly through a mirror. And then drivers make way for an ambulance. I think it was brilliant. In Korea, the letter of ambulance is reversed in a mirror of car. How about in your country?

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Hello again [이름]! Here are my corrections dear. Please check it out and be mindful with the corrections. I will talk to you later. I would like to talk about our ambulances here in our country later my dear. So, I am looking forward to talk to you. See ya! -Teacher Chloe     I found video about cute cat in the youtube. >>I found a video about a cute cat in youtube.com.  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F-_EOxPlpfg>>Here is the link for the video.This vedio is hot issue on the Korean web site. >>The video is hot in any websites in Korea. The cat in this video crossed his legs like human. >>The cat in the video crossed his legs like a human. I\'m used watching video about cute cat before I had a cat. >>I used to watch videos about cute cats before I have had cat. I saw a picture about ambulance in a abroad. >>I saw pictures about ambulances abroad. And I found the letter of ambulance is reversed. >>The word 'ambulance' is reversed. The reason why the letter of ambulance is reversed is for drivers and patient. >>I found out that the reason why, and it is actually for drivers and for patients. Drivers who drive in front of a ambulance can see the spells of \"Ambulance\" correctly through a mirror. >>Drivers who are driving before an ambulance would see the word 'ambulance' through their side mirrors. And then drivers make way for an ambulance. >>Thus, drivers will give the way for the ambulance. I think it was brilliant. >>The idea is really brilliant. In Korea, the letter of ambulance is reversed in a mirror of car. >>I think it is the same here in our country. How about in your country? >>Correct  

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