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2012-02-02 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Grammar Exercise 1. While the job is very interesting, it's also very badly paid. 2. We'll go to the mountains on Saturday as if it doesn't rain. 3. The winters here are very cold as long as the summers are very hot. 4. You can write the report when you want so that it's ready by the end of the month. 5. It looks as long as the government has got a lot of problems. I received my camera today! I was so exciting. Operating this camera was complicated. Because this camera had a lot of useful functions. I hope that I familiarize myself with my camera before arriving in Praha. Next Saturday, my cousin will marry. He is older than me ten years. Actually I didn't have a chance to hanging out with my cousins. Because All my cousins lived in other city. When I went to their city, it took 9 hours. Last time I saw him is more than five years ago. Maybe I could feel awkward, But I'll be fine with my parents. And I expected marriage. Because It'll be first marriage I'm invited.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. Here are the corrections. 1. While the job is very interesting, it\'s also very badly paid. >> Correct.2. We\'ll go to the mountains on Saturday as if it doesn\'t rain. >> We\'ll go to the mountains on Saturday as long as it doesn\'t rain.3. The winters here are very cold as long as the summers are very hot.>> The winters here are very cold while the summers are very hot.4. You can write the report when you want so that it\'s ready by the end of the month.>> You can write the report wjen you want as long as it\'s ready by the end of the month.5. It looks as long as the government has got a lot of problems.>> It looks as if the government has got a lot of problems.I received my camera today! >> Correct.I was so exciting. >> I am so excited.Operating this camera was complicated. Because this camera had a lot of useful functions. >> Operating this camera is complicated because it has lots of useful functions.I hope that I familiarize myself with my camera before arriving in Praha.>> I hope that I can familiarize myself with my camera before I arrive in Praha.Next Saturday, my cousin will marry. >> Next Saturday, my cousin will get married.He is older than me ten years. >> He is ten years older than me.Actually I didn\'t have a chance to hanging out with my cousins. Because All my cousins lived in other city. >> Actually, I didn\'t have a chance to hang out with my cousins because they all live in another city.When I went to their city, it took 9 hours. >> It takes 9 hours for me to get to their city.Last time I saw him is more than five years ago. >> The last time I saw him was more than five years ago.Maybe I could feel awkward, But I\'ll be fine with my parents. >> Maybe I will feel awkward, but I\'ll be fine with my parents.And I expected marriage. Because It\'ll be first marriage I\'m invited. >> I am excited for the wedding because it\'s my first time to attend one.

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