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2012-02-09 · 첨삭 강사 Joan

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1. Ostriches run fast but can't fly at all. Likewise chichens. Chickens are extremely poor fliers. 2. He didn't have his watch on. Therefore he couldn't tell her what time it was. 3. He had dinner and did his homework. After that, he watched TV for a while. 4. He gives money to anybody who asks. In the same way, his wife gives to lots of charities. 5. He gives money to charities. In contrast, his brother never gives a penny to anybody. 6. He's rich and is known for being philanthropic. Unfortunately, he gets lots of calls from charities. 7. He gives too much homework and too many tests. For the reason, I'm planning to drop the class. 8. He needed an education. Thus, his parents dicided to send him to school. 9. He wanted to ask her name. However, he was too shy. 10. He was in a car accident. Hopefully, he wasn't badly injured.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]^^ Here\'s homewrok part 2.  Well great job for submitting your homework. Check this out^^ T\' Joan   1. Ostriches run fast but can\'t fly at all. Likewise chichens. Chickens are extremely poor fliers. >>Ostriches run fast but can\'t fly at all. Likewise,chickens are extremely poor fliers. 2. He didn\'t have his watch on. Therefore he couldn\'t tell her what time it was. >>CORRECT!3. He had dinner and did his homework. After that, he watched TV for a while. >>CORRECT!4. He gives money to anybody who asks. In the same way, his wife gives to lots of charities. >>CORRECT!5. He gives money to charities. In contrast, his brother never gives a penny to anybody. >>CORRECT!6. He\'s rich and is known for being philanthropic. Unfortunately, he gets lots of calls from charities. >>He\'s rich and is known for being philanthropic.Understandably, he gets lots of calls from charities.7. He gives too much homework and too many tests. For the reason, I\'m planning to drop the class. >>CORRECT!8. He needed an education. Thus, his parents dicided to send him to school. >>He needed an education. Thus, his parents decided to send him to school.9. He wanted to ask her name. However, he was too shy. >>CORRECT!10. He was in a car accident. Hopefully, he wasn\'t badly injured. >>He was in a car accident. Happily, he wasn\'t badly injured.

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