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Hello, [이름]!

How\'s work so far?

I guess you are a little busy.

Anyway, check my corrections for you.

I hope I understood them well.

I am going to see you later in our class.

~Teacher Chloe

Dear [Name],
>>Correct!
Please edit the sentences below. ASAP. 

>>Please edit the sentences below ASAP. 
1. Currently, Hospitals or local clinics tend to purchase the unit at low prices with high quality.

>>Nowadays, hospitals or local clinics tend to purchase units with high quality at low prices.

However, even though the product quality is good, if the prices are high, they have excepted the unit from the purchasing lists.
>>They do not purchase high quality units at high prices. 
2. the reason why the doctors prefer RF Lesioning procedure because of avoiding to side effects, drug therapy and increasing effects.

>>The reason why doctors prefer (RF) Lesioning procedure is to avoid side effects of drug therapy.

RF Lesioning procedure has good benefits to have short time than drug therapy and to minimize the damage of nerve system.  

>>(RF) Lesioning procedure has good benefits for short time use than drug therapy such as minimizing the damage of nerve system.