H/W

2012-10-17 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Hi Sheela! It's the middle day of a week today. Time goes fly~. My boss is on vacation but I did a lot of work. I'm a diligent worker. :) I didn't explain the korean song entitled "Memories of the wind" in our class. It is a very beautiful music. I want to hear you the song. Here is the url of youtube about this song. If you want to take a rest, I recommend to listen it with closing your eyes. :) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yYYlmfJ2Rds HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: 'There' versus 'It' I went to Jeju Island last week. _It_ is a fantastic place. __There_ were a lot of people enjoying themselves. __It_ was really fun to go strolling on the beach. On the beach, _It_ was very good to do sunbathing. I would have stayed longer but _There_ wasn't enough time

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Hello [이름], You really are diligent! Atleast you were not bored at work today. . Thank you for recommending that song and hopefully one of this days, I can find time to listen to it. See you tomorrow! T.Sheela Hi Sheela! >>Correct!It\'s the middle day of a week today. >> It\'s the middle day of the week today. >>OR: Today is the middle day of the week. Time goes fly~. My boss is on vacation but I did a lot of work. I\'m a diligent worker. :) >> Time goes by~.My boss is on vacation but I did a lot of work. I\'m a diligent worker. :)I didn\'t explain the korean song entitled \"Memories of the wind\" in our class. >> Correct! It is a very beautiful music. >>Correct! >>OR: It is a very beautiful song. I want to hear you the song. Here is the url of youtube about this song. >> I want you to hear the song. Here is the url from youtube about this song. If you want to take a rest, I recommend to listen it with closing your eyes. :) >>If you want to take a rest, I recommend you to listen to this song while closing your eyes. :)http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yYYlmfJ2RdsHOMEWORK FOR TODAY:\'There\' versus \'It\'I went to Jeju Island last week. _It_ is a fantastic place. __There_ were a lot of people enjoying themselves. __It_ was really fun to go strolling on the beach. On the beach, _It_ was very good to do sunbathing. I would have stayed longer but _there_ wasn\'t enough time >>Correct!

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