H/W
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Sheela!
It's the middle day of a week today. Time goes fly~. My boss is on vacation but I did a lot of work. I'm a diligent worker. :)
I didn't explain the korean song entitled "Memories of the wind" in our class. It is a very beautiful music. I want to hear you the song. Here is the url of youtube about this song. If you want to take a rest, I recommend to listen it with closing your eyes. :)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yYYlmfJ2Rds
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
'There' versus 'It'
I went to Jeju Island last week. _It_ is a fantastic place. __There_ were a lot of people enjoying themselves. __It_ was really fun to go strolling on the beach. On the beach, _It_ was very good to do sunbathing. I would have stayed longer but _There_ wasn't enough time
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
You really are diligent! Atleast you were not bored at work today. . Thank you for recommending that song and hopefully one of this days, I can find time to listen to it. See you tomorrow!
T.Sheela
Hi Sheela!
>>Correct!It\'s the middle day of a week today.
>> It\'s the middle day of the week today.
>>OR: Today is the middle day of the week.
Time goes fly~. My boss is on vacation but I did a lot of work. I\'m a diligent worker. :)
>> Time goes by~.My boss is on vacation but I did a lot of work. I\'m a diligent worker. :)I didn\'t explain the korean song entitled \"Memories of the wind\" in our class.
>> Correct!
It is a very beautiful music.
>>Correct!
>>OR: It is a very beautiful song.
I want to hear you the song. Here is the url of youtube about this song.
>> I want you to hear the song. Here is the url from youtube about this song.
If you want to take a rest, I recommend to listen it with closing your eyes. :)
>>If you want to take a rest, I recommend you to listen to this song while closing your eyes. :)http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yYYlmfJ2RdsHOMEWORK FOR TODAY:\'There\' versus \'It\'I went to Jeju Island last week. _It_ is a fantastic place. __There_ were a lot of people enjoying themselves. __It_ was really fun to go strolling on the beach. On the beach, _It_ was very good to do sunbathing. I would have stayed longer but _there_ wasn\'t enough time
>>Correct!
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