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2012-11-29 · 첨삭 강사 Michelle

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Be Positive � Do Something Day is on March 1st. It is our [change] to make a difference in the world and do something positive. It might [ chance] our lives for the better. It often seems as though the world is full [of ] negative news, negative people and negative images. This day is for you to [reverse ] this. An Australian man, Harold Cameron, [ created] this day. He has a lifetime's experience of turning negatives into positives. Harold says on the Be Positive website: 'I was born [ sickness] as a child. It was thought that I would never live, but I did.' He explains how he [overcame] being abandoned as a child, abuse, drugs, the death of close family members and other setbacks. Every time he bounced [front ] through positive thinking.

강사 첨삭

[이름], ^^ I am glad that you find time to do your homework. You made my day! Keep up learning English! ^^ I can see you enjoy learning. Wonderful! Every sacrifice has its reward! Hard work is the route to success. I will see you later in class! ^^ T. Michelle =) Be Positive Do Something Day is on March 1st. It is our [change] to make a difference in the world and do something positive. >>> It is our chance to make a difference in the world and do something positive. It might [ chance] our lives for the better. >>> It might change our lives for the better. It often seems as though the world is full [of ] negative news, negative people and negative images. >>> Correct This day is for you to [reverse ] this. >>> Correct An Australian man, Harold Cameron, [ created] this day. >>> Correct He has a lifetime\'s experience of turning negatives into positives. Harold says on the Be Positive website: \'I was born [ sickness] as a child. It was thought that I would never live, but I did.\' He has a lifetime\'s experience of turning negatives into positives. Harold says on the Be Positive website: \'I was born sick as a child. It was thought that I would never live, but I did.\' He explains how he [overcame] being abandoned as a child, abuse, drugs, the death of close family members and other setbacks. >>>Correct Every time he bounced [front ] through positive thinking. >>>Every time he bounced back through positive thinking.

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