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We had a famouse fashion designer in Korea. His name is Andre-Kim. He was born in one of country. Oneday, he found a beatiful actress in the movie when he went to cinema. So,he decided his own job that wants to be a fashion designer for women. And he entered to fashion school for his dream. He had been studied hard and he had sucessful of his draem finally. Many customers want to wear the clothes he designed. Children want to wear rounded T shirts and short pants with sleeper shoes in summer time of Korea.

HI Pastor, Wow, you wrote it again. It’s better this time but I still have corrections in it. Some are just with the spelling of the words so you have to be extra careful with that. See you and take care, Connie   We had a famouse fashion designer in Korea. >> We had a famous fashion designer in Korea. His name is Andre-Kim. He was born in one of country. >> His name is Andre Kim, he was born in our country. Oneday, he found a beatiful actress in the movie when he went to cinema. >> One day, he found a beautiful actress in the movie when he went to the cinema. So,he decided his own job that wants to be a fashion designer for women. >> He decided about this own job, now he wants to be a fashion designer for women. And he entered to fashion school for his dream. >> He entered to a fashion school for his dream. He had been studied hard and he had sucessful of his draem finally. >> He studied hard and finally he reached his dream successfully. Many customers want to wear the clothes he designed. >> Many customers want to wear the clothes that he designed. Children want to wear rounded T shirts and short pants with sleeper shoes in summer time of Korea. >> Children want to wear round-neck T-shirts and short pants with slippers during summer time in Korea.