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Here is another one! I want to visit Nepal. Because if I go to there, I can take a chance to trekking Mt.Annapurna. My hobby is climbing so there was my dream but now there is my object! I really want to enjoy the feeling a sense of accomplishment. I think it will be amazing

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Thank [이름] for sharing [이름]r thoughts about the topic.

Go and pursue [이름]r dream/plan.

I know [이름] have the determination in [이름]r heart to achieve the things that [이름] want. 

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T. Isabel 

Here is another one!

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I want to visit Nepal.

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Because if I go to there, I can take a chance to trekking Mt.Annapurna.

>> Because if I will go there, I will have a chance to do some trekking on Mt. Annapurna. 

My hobby is climbing so there was my dream but now there is my object!

>> My hobby is mountain climbing and trekking to Mt. Annapurna was my dream but now, it is my objective. 

I really want to enjoy the feeling a sense of accomplishment.

>> I really want to enjoy the feeling of sense of accomplishment. 

I think it will be amazing

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