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2013-06-07 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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There are many vehicles, but I think airplanes are has changed people's lives a lot. I have two reasons for them. First, we can go to somewhere quickly. Because it makes time short to go anywhere, we can arrive there early than we expected. Secondly, our life has changed more comfortable and convinient.Because services in the flights are improving constantly, if we take a flight and receive good services, we can feel comfortable and be satisfied with them.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Ms. [Name]! Fun-filled Friday! Thanks for doing your composition. Well, airplaines have indeed changed our lives since we can go to any places comfortably and conveniently. We can go to near or far places easily. ^^ Tomorrow is  weekend but I know you are going to study for your exam. But don\'t be too hard on yourself okay? I\'ll see you later! Always, T. Kathrine ^^ There are many vehicles, but I think airplanes are has changed people\'s lives a lot. >> There are many vehicles but I think airplanes have changed people\'s lives a lot. I have two reasons for them. >> CORRECT  First, we can go to somewhere quickly. >> Firstly, we can go somewhere quickly. Because it makes time short to go anywhere, we can arrive there early than we expected. >> Because it makes the travel shorter so we can arrive there early as we expected. Secondly, our life has changed more comfortable and convinient. >> CORRECT (*spelling \"convenient\') >> OR: Secondly, our life has changed comfortably and conveniently. Because services in the flights are improving constantly, if we take a flight and receive good services, we can feel comfortable and be satisfied with them. >> CORRECT

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