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Hello there!
Good morning^^
Thank you for sharing your ideas. Good job because you are very good in expressing your thoughts.
Actually you can be a good movie director or producer. Keep it up! ^_^
Always take care!
- T. Kathrine-
I think the good movie is a thing which can give us good feeling.
>> I think a good movie can give us a good feeling.
For this, I think it should have three factors.
>> Correct! ^^
First is actors and actress who are good at act.
>> First, actors and actress who are good in acting.
If a charicter actor appear, we can believe that movie might be interesting.
>> If the actor appears, we can believe that the movie will be interesting.
Second is a interesting material.
>>Second is an interesting material.
For example, most interesting movie I saw was about the love story of both a robot and a woman.
>> Correct!^^
This was the drama of Japan and I was shoked by this story which had never been before.
>>This was a drama from Japan and I was shocked by this story which I have never seen before.
So, when I saw that drama, I enjoyed it from ep1 to final episide.
>>Correct! ^^ (it\'s just the spelling episode 1 to the final episode).
Third is the movie which uses modern technologies such as computer graphic.
>>Correct! ^^
>> Or Third is a movie which uses modern technologies such as computer graphic.
In fact, I like watching 3D or 4D movie.
>>Correct! ^^
Because they are amazing so that make me get in new world of technology!
>> Correct! ^^
>> Or Because they are amazing and they make me get in new world of technology!
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