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Hello there!
Thanks for writing your composition.
I do agree that it will depend on what situation you are going to lie.
But always bear in mind that telling a lie if not hurt other people but it will mostly hurt you.
I\'ll see you later!
Have a great day ahead! ^^
T. Maria^^
I disagree that it is always essential to the truth.
>> I disagree that it is always essential to tell the truth.
I think we need to lie a little bit in some circumstances.
>> CORRECT
First, if we tell the truth and it can make people hurt, we can lie for other people.
>> First, if we tell the truth and it will hurt other people, then we can lie to them.
For example, when I was child, I fell on the ground and hurt a lot.
>> CORRECT
But I lied to my mother not to worry her.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: I lied to my mother for her not to worry.
Then, I treat myself.
>> Then I treated myself.
Finally, it was revealed, but I think it was a good way to handle.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: Finally, my mom knew about it but I think that it was a good way to handle it.
Second, if we need to make a good relation, we can lie.
>> CORRECT
For example, when I was high school student, I lied, \"I like playing the baseball\" to make a friends.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: For example, when I was in high school, I lied that I like playing baseball just to make friends.
Actually, I didn\'t like playing the baseball and even I didn\'t know how to play.
>> Actually, I don\'t like playing baseball and I don\'t even know how to play it.
But because other friends liked it except for me, I pretended to like it and played with them.
>> Because my friends like it except for me so I pretended to like it and played with them.
Except for these circumstances, we should always be careful not to lie.
>> CORRECT
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