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Hi there^^,
Thank you for doing your homework.
Yes, I also think that we cannot commit the same mistake because if ever we are in the situation again, it will be your choice whether to do the right thing or not.
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T. Maria^^
I agree that we can learn more from finding out that we have made mistakes.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I agree that we can learn more from our mistakes.
I have two reasons for that.
>> CORRECT!
First, we can not repeat mistakes which we have done because we have already experienced.
>> First, we cannot commit the same mistakes that we have done because we already experienced them.
Our brain remember that we have already made mistakes.
>> Our brain remembers that we have already committed such mistakes.
>> OR: We will always remember every mistake that we commit.
So, we won\'t do something again to avoid bad results.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: So, we won\'t make any wrong decision or choices to avoid bad results.
Second, though we suceed some works, we forget the process that we experienced easily.
>> Second, although we may succeed in some works, we easily forget about our experiences.
So, when we are in same situation, we could make mistakes easily.
>> So, when we are in the same situation, we can commit mistakes easily.
But if we have made mistakes and learn something from that, then we couldn\'t forget what we experienced and make an effort to repeat again.
>> But, if we commit mistakes and learn something from that, then we couldn\'t forget what we have experienced and make an effort not to commit the same mistakes again.
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