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This was great! You really have good points here. ^^
Keep on writing! Please don\'t forget to check the corrections I made for you here.
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T.Maria^^
I agree that we have to act more carefully and slowly in urgent situation.
>> I agree that we have to act more carefully and slowly in urgent situations.
I have two reasons for that.
>> CORRECT!!
First, there is a proverb in Korea and it is you should turn around when you are in urgent situation.
>> First, there is a proverb in Korea which says, you should turn around when you are in an urgent situation.
That\'s because we could be in worst situation.
>> CORRECT!! [...in a worst situation.]
Therefore, it is important to think again wheter doing that is right or not before you do somehing.
>> Therefore, it is important to think again whether we\'re about to do something right or not before executing it.
Second, if we think one more time, we could get better next time.
>> CORRECT!!
Because we can think what is better option, we can decide best way to resolve a problem.
>> Because we can think what the better option is and we can decide for best way to resolve a problem.
Therefore, I think we should have a time to consider ways to solve the problems only if it isn\'t crisis that requires solutions quickly.
>> Therefore, I think we should have time to consider ways to solve a problem only if it isn\'t a crisis that requires solutions quickly.
The best way is judging whether we have to solve fast.
>> CORRECT!!
Then, we should decide priorities and solve the each problem carefully with the best way.
>> Then, we should decide our priorities and solve each problem carefully with the best way.
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