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Hi:) I'm glad to see you and i'm really sorry for the happening of today's:] I was really tired yesterday so I couldn't wake up. And I want to have a night class, but the timetable of my school makes me choose morning classT^T
I usually got angered when I'm in a situation where I can't do what I really want for. When I'm in a situation like that, I'm depressed with the fact and have a sense of shame. The situation that I got angered has a wide range. from when I want to buy something but I can't buy it(usually cause it's expensive for me) to when a person who is not a good relationship with me has been a smooth sailing. And if I have a words focusing on the meaning of 'petulant' that has a little different from 'angry', I'm petulant when my enemy is in a high position compared to that I'm in. especially, I really hate that my enemy is entering an elite university. Whenever I hear that he/she was entering that kind of university, I often feel inferior to him/her.
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Good afternoon, Yisol!
What a confession!
Thank you so much for being honest with me, Yisol.
I do think that it can be difficult to live on with something that sort of bothers you because you want to do something else.
Nonetheless, it may take a toll on you to study early in the morning, but I do hope that you will get the hang of it soon.
Sometimes, we have to be flexible enough as we face all the challenges that life may bring.
We have to take things easy, so we won\'t feel petulant in any way.
Keep on writing, Yisol!
Your thoughts are amazing and you were able to put them into words in an intelligible manner.
Just check out the modifications that I made below to make your expressions more clear-cut.
Have a great afternoon, Yisol!
Also, have a good rest later for our class tomorrow.
_Klein
Hi:) I\'m glad to see you and i\'m really sorry for the happening of today\'s:]
>>HI! I\'m glad to see/meet you and I\'m really sorry about what happened earlier today.
I was really tired yesterday so I couldn\'t wake up.
>>Correct
OR >> I was really tired yesterday, so I had a difficult time waking up early.
>> I was really exhausted yesterday, so I had a hard time dragging myself out of bed.
And I want to have a night class, but the timetable of my school makes me choose morning classT^T>>And I want to have a night class, but the timetable of my school made me choose a morning class.>>Also, I want my class to be in the evening but the timetable that my school gave me requires me to take a morning class.
I usually got angered when I\'m in a situation where I can\'t do what I really want for.
>>I usually get angry when I\'m in a situation where I can\'t do what I really want to.
>> Usually, I am angered by some situations where I can\'t do what I really want to.
When I\'m in a situation like that, I\'m depressed with the fact and have a sense of shame.
>>When I\'m a situation like that, I\'m depressed with the fact that I can\'t do anything about it and I have this sense of shame.
>>When I\'m put in this kind of situation, I feel depressed and ashamed with the fact that I can\'t do anything about it.
The situation that I got angered has a wide range. from when I want to buy something but I can\'t buy it(usually cause it\'s expensive for me) to when a person who is not a good relationship with me has been a smooth sailing.
>>Such situations that anger me have a wide range. It is from when I want to buy something but I can\'t buy it, usually because it\'s expensive for me to when a person with whom I don\'t have a good relationship with goes on her/his own smoothly.
>>Such situations that anger me have a wide range. It is from something petty like I want to buy something that I can\'t afford, to something personal like not having a good relationship with someone.
And if I have a words focusing on the meaning of \'petulant\' that has a little different from \'angry\', I\'m petulant when my enemy is in a high position compared to that I\'m in. >>And if I have words focusing on the meaning of \"petulant\", which are a little different from \"angry\", Im petulant when my enemy is in a high position compared with where I am in.
especially, I really hate that my enemy is entering an elite university.
>>I especially hate my enemy who is entering an elite university.
>>I especially hate my enemy who is attending an elite university.
Whenever I hear that he/she was entering that kind of university, I often feel inferior to him/her.
>>Correct
OR >> Whenever they brag about it, I feel inferior to him/her.
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