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I think philanderers don't have basic courtesy towards people. Before they are woman or man, they are a human. If they are a human, they have to respect each other's feelings whatever the thing is love, friendship, and etc. So they must not cheat on their lovers and deceive them. Moreover, In relationships between people, there are nothing important things more than trusting eachother. So if they lose their trust in the relationship between lovers, We can't continue the relationships. And cause the philanderers are the people who destroy the relationships and bring a sense of betrayal, I can say they are no worth being called as a 'human'. Even they don't keep their basic promises which is done with their lovers. So I can so sure they are less than a human trash.
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Hi, Yisol!
Again, thank for dropping by our composition board.
More importantly, thank you for sharing your great insights with me regarding \"philanderers\".
You\'ve given me a lot of things to think about.
Perhaps, I can also teach you how to answer such question from a student of language and literature\'s point of view.
Like I said before, keep on writing, Yisol.
Also, continue reading different pieces of literature.
Catch you tomorrow!
_Klein
I think philanderers don\'t have basic courtesy towards people. >>I think, philanderers don\'t have the basic courtesy towards people.
Before they are woman or man, they are a human.
>>Before they become \"WOMEN\" or \"MEN\", first, they are humans.
>>Humans are women and men.
>> Men and women are all humans.
If they are a human, they have to respect each other\'s feelings whatever the thing is love, friendship, and etc. So they must not cheat on their lovers and deceive them.
>>If they are humans, they have to respect each other\'s feelings whatever the thing may be about like love, friendship, and etc. and they must not cheat on their lovers or even deceive them.
Moreover, In relationships between people, there are nothing important things more than trusting eachother.
>>Moreover, in relationships among people, there\'s nothing more important than trust.
So if they lose their trust in the relationship between lovers, We can\'t continue the relationships.
>>So if lovers lose their trust for each other, they can\'t go on with their relationship smoothly.
And cause the philanderers are the people who destroy the relationships and bring a sense of betrayal, I can say they are no worth being called as a \'human\'.
>>And because philanderers are people who destroy relationships and bring in a sense of betrayal to others, I can say they are not worthy to be called \"human/s\".
Even they don\'t keep their basic promises which is done with their lovers. So I can so sure they are less than a human trash.
>>They don\'t even keep their basic promises to their lovers, so I am sure that they are less than a human trash.
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