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In Korean society, There are still regionalism, kinship and school relations. Of course, These are not done openly, but secretly. Because many of Koreans think that relations among people are really important. So sometimes it could be done in a negative way. Usually, when I saw or heard about the people who had pulled strings, I have emotions of the two. envy and jealousy. The reason that I have for them is simple. they have what I want without any efforts. Even I was frustrated when I heard the news that a girl whose father's job is an actor went to the famous singer's concert with him. Cause the ticket was really expensive and it was hard for me to get the ticket, I was angered to her who didn't pay for the ticket and who get an nice seat. But these days I don't care about these kinds of people. Since there are many corruptions that I can't handle, I just think that that's how they live in this world. And I can learn priceless things through a process that they can't experience.

Yisol, I am, more or less, deeply moved by your composition!I have to point out three things here.The first one has something to do with your honesty.Your take on corruption may be startling but I can never cross out the fact that this line of thinking came about because of human nature/inclination.Humans are undeniably fallible.This mere concept gives us the hint that we are bound to make \"mistakes\".Actually, we aren\'t even sure if they are \"mistakes\" because we can view such with different standards.Nonetheless, we also have to put into consideration that we don\'t really make the same mistakes over and over.To some extent, we try to modify them as much as we can.On the other hand, we purposely do them again and again because we don\'t think that they are that bad.We see a streak of goodness in them in some ways that keeps us anchored to them.Secondly, you\'ve opened up venues that can be analyzed much further.Relationships among humans are infinite.How they are used or manipulated also varies from one person to another, one type of relationship to another, in various contexts [time and space].Emotions play a vital role here and there.Human psychology is, indeed, a complex matter that may never lead us to one conclusion.And last but not the least, there is this attempt to share something broad with specific supporting details as can be sensed from the entirety of your composition.Intertextuality is something that we all have to learn how to employ in all our undertakings.Everything is absolutely interconnected with each other.This has long been proven by all specialists in all fields.I, myself, stand firm on this \"fact\".Thank you so much for sharing this one to me, Yisol.You\'ve given me a lot of ideas to think about, which I like the most!Time to bounce now!Are you enjoying your weekend, Yisol?I do hope that you are!Keep safe and catch you next month! _Klein In Korean society, There are still regionalism, kinship and school relations. >>Correct [capitalization]OR >> In Korean society, there are still regionalism, kinship and school relations.>> In Korean society, relationships among people are still tight.>>In Korean society, social attachments are indispensible. Of course, These are not done openly, but secretly. >>CorrectOR >> Of course, these are not done openly, but secretly.>> Of course, these are done discretely.>> Of course, these are not shown overtly.>> Of course, such aren\'t that much flaunted.>> Such may not be voiced out but are discretely existent. Because many of Koreans think that relations among people are really important. So sometimes it could be done in a negative way. >>>>This is because many Koreans think that relations/relationship among people are really important, so sometimes, it can be done in a negative way.>>Many Koreans think that relations/relationships among people are really important, so sometimes, such [regionalism, kinship, school relations, etc.] can be done in a negative way.>>Many Koreans pay high regards to social ties, so sometimes, such can be used in bad ways.>>Many Koreans prize social ties, so sometimes, such enable them to come up with devious ideas that may benefit them given some economically and socially-related circumstances.Usually, when I saw or heard about the people who had pulled strings, I have emotions of the two. envy and jealousy. >>I used to feel envious and jealous of those people who I see and hear have pulled strings.>> I used to have these two emotions: \"envy and jealousy\" when I see and hear about people who had pulled strings to be successful.The reason that I have for them is simple. >>CorrectOR >> My reason for this is simple.>> My reason is simple.>> The reason that I have for feeling such kinds of emotions is simple. they have what I want without any efforts. >>They got what I want without exerting effort.>> They got what I want without any efforts.>> They got what I want without hardwork. Even I was frustrated when I heard the news that a girl whose father\'s job is an actor went to the famous singer\'s concert with him. >>CorrectOR >> I was even frustrated when I heard the news about a girl, whose father is an actor, went to a famous concert with him.Cause the ticket was really expensive and it was hard for me to get the ticket, I was angered to her who didn\'t pay for the ticket and who get an nice seat. >> Cause the ticket was really expensive and it was hard for me to get the ticket, I got angry with her since she didn\'t pay for the ticket and got a nice seat.>> The ticket was really expensive and I couldn\'t afford it then, so I was angered by the fact that she ddin\'t have to pay for it and even got a nice seat. But these days I don\'t care about these kinds of people. >>Correct! [punctuation mark]OR >> But these days, I don\'t care too much about these kinds of people.>> But these days, I am no longer bothered by these kinds of people.Since there are many corruptions that I can\'t handle, I just think that that\'s how they live in this world. >> CorrectOR >> Since corruption has become prevalent, I just think that this is how some people live in this world.>> Since corruption has become prevalent, I just think that this is how some people think they can survive in this dog-eat-dog world.And I can learn priceless things through a process that they can\'t experience. >>Correct