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My favorite celebrity is Ha Jeong Woo.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: The celebrity that interests me the most is Ha Jeong Woo.
He is an actor.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: He does acting.
Kim Yong Geon,his father, who is the famous actor,too.
>>Kim Yong Geon, his father, is a famous actor, too.
The reason I like Ha Jeong Woo is that he is very good at acting.
>>The reason why I like Ha Jeong Woo is because he is very good in acting.
Especialy, he is good at eating acting.
>>Especially whenever he eats in his roles.
So, his movies are all funny.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: So, his movies are all comedy.
He took film \"Berlin\",\"The terror,LIVE\",\"Namesless Gangster\",\"Take Off\",\"The Chaser\" , etc, which is a very diverse genre.
>>He had a role in the film \"Berlin\", \"The Terror LIVE\", \"Nameless Gangster\", \"Take Off\", \"The Chaser\", etc. which have diverse genres.
My impressive film is \"The Chaser\". Because he had a killer role in film.
>>My most favorite film that he had is \"The Chaser\" because he had a killer role the that film.
His acting is very realistic.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: He acts realistically.
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