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2014-06-18 · 첨삭 강사 Eva

학생이 쓴 원문

My favorite celebrity is Ha Jeong Woo. He is an actor. Kim Yong Geon,his father, who is the famous actor,too. The reason I like Ha Jeong Woo is that he is very good at acting. Especialy, he is good at eating acting. So, his movies are all funny. He took film "Berlin","The terror,LIVE","Namesless Gangster","Take Off","The Chaser" , etc, which is a very diverse genre. My impressive film is "The Chaser". Because he had a killer role in film. His acting is very realistic.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!


Even though we don\'t have a class today, thank you for doing your homework. ^^

I really do appreciate it.

I hope that we can already have our class again on Friday. ^^

Always take care!


Teacher Eva




My favorite celebrity is Ha Jeong Woo.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: The celebrity that interests me the most is Ha Jeong Woo.


He is an actor.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: He does acting.


Kim Yong Geon,his father, who is the famous actor,too.

>>Kim Yong Geon, his father, is a famous actor, too.


The reason I like Ha Jeong Woo is that he is very good at acting.

>>The reason why I like Ha Jeong Woo is because he is very good in acting.


Especialy, he is good at eating acting.

>>Especially whenever he eats in his roles.


So, his movies are all funny.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: So, his movies are all comedy.


He took film \"Berlin\",\"The terror,LIVE\",\"Namesless Gangster\",\"Take Off\",\"The Chaser\" , etc, which is a very diverse genre.

>>He had a role in the film \"Berlin\", \"The Terror LIVE\", \"Nameless Gangster\", \"Take Off\", \"The Chaser\", etc. which have diverse genres.


My impressive film is \"The Chaser\".  Because he had a killer role in film.

>>My most favorite film that he had is \"The Chaser\" because he had a killer role the that film.


His acting is very realistic.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: He acts realistically.

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