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yesterday home work 1. I have been waiting for the bus for 20 minutes. 2. Tom played golf during Julie went shopping with her friends. 3. The family lived in Japan for three years. 4. Larry called his mother while Caroline was watching television. 5. My mother came to stay with us during the summer for 10 days. 6. Yesterday we played tennis for 2 hours. 7. While the holidays we relax, go sightseeing and visit friends. 8. In Europe, meals are different. People stay at the table for a long time. I will make a gadget that can unlock the all the locks.Because I don't want to hold a lots of keys in my pocket.Also, when there is a lock in the class, then I can unlock it. So i want to invent it.

Hi there Paul!
Thanks for doing your homework. ^^
You did a good job.
Please go over the corrections I\'ve written.
I am also grateful that you shared your idea about gadgets.
I think that is a good idea, however, we also have to think of the negative effects of it.
What do you think will happen if you create a gadget that can unlock all the locks.
Anyway, that is for you to think about.
Enjoy this day! See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
yesterday home work
>> My homework yesterday.
1. I have been waiting for the bus for 20 minutes.
>> Correct!
2. Tom played golf during Julie went shopping with her friends.
>> Tom played golf while Julie went shopping with her friends.
3. The family lived in Japan for three years.
>> Correct!
4. Larry called his mother while Caroline was watching television.
>> Correct!
5. My mother came to stay with us during the summer for 10 days.
>> Correct!
6. Yesterday we played tennis for 2 hours.
>> Correct!
7. While the holidays we relax, go sightseeing and visit friends.
>> During the holidays we relax, go sightseeing and visit friends.
8. In Europe, meals are different. People stay at the table for a long time.
>> Correct!
I will make a gadget that can unlock the all the locks.
>> I will make a gadget that can unlock all the locks.
Because I don\'t want to hold a lots of keys in my pocket.
>> Because I don\'t want to hold a lot of keys.
OR>> Because I don\'t want to have a lot of keys in my pocket.
Also, when there is a lock in the class, then I can unlock it.
>> Also, when the classroom is locked, then I can unlock it.
So i want to invent it.
>> So I want to invent it.