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Hi teacher Chloe! Are you enjoying your vacation? I really hope so. I check your correction and I want to say I am very appreciative of your kind correction. Although I try not to repeat same mistakes, I do. But you always make corrections kindly. Thank you so much. You gave me the topic about homelss people. Actually I think them unfavorable somewhat. They do not anything helpful for their lives although they still have the body that can work and do something. If there is something that our community does for them, it is to encourage the will to improve their lives themselves. And then they want to do, our community should teach the way to live by themselves. If there is no will to do something in their minds, we can not help them. So the supports we do have to focus the educational form not financial. This is my opinion. And I'm worried that It's too unfeeling. I know anyone can be faced with adversity and can not get out of the pain sometimes. But the will is important, i think.

Hey hey hey! Thanks for asking about my vacation. I hope you had a wonderful time as much as I did. I had heaps of fun since I spent time with my family. I even ate lots and lots of food. I was so hungry from my trip to my parents\' place that I ate 6 cups of rice when I got home! Oh my goodness. Plus I ate one whole roasted chicken! The whole chicken! And I ate 4 donuts after that haha. I can\'t believe that\'s even possible. Making your corrections is no biggie (: I am very happy to help you out. Don\'t worry about committing the same mistakes once in a while. You don\'t get to correct your sentences in one go. It will take several mistakes to eventually get used to the right grammar. When you make mistakes, the important thing is you have this feeling that there is something wrong with your sentence. That alone is very important. If you have this feeling, your can try to correct your own sentence, eventually you\'ll get the hang of it.-Teacher Chloe Hi teacher Chloe!>>Correct!Are you enjoying your vacation?>>Correct!I really hope so.>>Correct!I check your correction and I want to say I am very appreciative of your kind correction.>>Correct!>>I think it would be better if you use the adjectives \'detailed\' or \'specific\' to describe my my corrections. >>I check your corrections and I want to say I am very appreciative of your DETAILED corrections.Although I try not to repeat same mistakes, I do.>>Although I try not to repeat the same mistakes, I still do.But you always make corrections kindly.>>Correct! Thank you so much.>>Correct! You gave me the topic about homelss people.>>Correct!>>Be careful of typographical errors: homeless.Actually I think them unfavorable somewhat.>>If your sentence starts with the word \'actually\' Always use a coma ( , ) after it. Adverb (somewhat) always comes first, followed by the adjective (unfavourable) it describes.>>Use the preposition \'Of\'>>Actually, I think OF them AS somewhat unfavourable.They do not anything helpful for their lives although they still have the body that can work and do something.>>You can try to simplify your sentence by saying:>>They do not do anything that can help improve their lives even though they still have bodies that can work.OR>>Although they still have bodies that can work, they do not do anything that can help improve their lives.If there is something that our community does for them, it is to encourage the will to improve their lives themselves.>>If there is something that our community CAN do for them, it is to encourage the will to improve their lives themselves.And then they want to do, our community should teach the way to live by themselves.>>And when they will be willing to work, our community should teach them ways to live by themselves.If there is no will to do something in their minds, we can not help them.>>Correct!So the supports we do have to focus the educational form not financial.>>The plural form of \'Support\' is the same, \'Support\'. Do not add an \'S\' at the end of this word to show it\'s plural form.>>So OUR SUPPORT should focus on the educational form, not the financial.This is my opinion.>>Correct!And I\'m worried that It\'s too unfeeling.>>Correct!>>I think it\'s better to use the word \'Unsympathetic\' instead of \'Unfeeling\'.>> And I\'m worried that it\'s too UNSYMPATHETIC. I know anyone can be faced with adversity and can not get out of the pain sometimes.>>Correct!But the will is important, i think.>>Remove the article \'The\' because you are not talking about a specific will.>>But will is important, I think.