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How do you deal with anger?
It is hard to answer. there are some ways to deal with anger.
First, do the basketball. Then you can almost forget angers thing.
Second, think positive.
강사 첨삭
Good morning!
Thanks for sharing your way in dealing with anger.
Anyway, It would have been better if you expand your explanation.
Describe how basketball makes you forget your anger or share your experiences.
I hope you\'ll do that next time.
See you on Monday!
~T. Jessie~
How do you deal with anger?
It is hard to answer.
>> Correct!
there are some ways to deal with anger.
>> There are some ways to deal withe anger.
First, do the basketball.
>> First, I do basketball.
OR>> First, I play basketball.
Then you can almost forget angers thing.
>> Then you can almost forget your anger.
Second, think positive.
>> Second, is to think positive.
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