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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi teacher Debby
I will not listen our lesson tomorrow because my grandfather elder brother passed away yesterday
Today, this is reason My feeling is soso(neutral)
so I went to the funeral hall yesterday..
and I will go to the funeral to see the last as relative
relative will start on 6 am to bury him
I'd like you to pray for my elder grandfaher...
<H/W>
Is it right to sacrifice some animals to have our clothing? What do you think?
I love animals but I think that people need sacrifice some animals to eat, wear...
So I don't want to thoughtless sacrifices animals.
They must gain things from natural as much as they need.
human stood on all animals has to defend thier ecosystem as the lord of all creation.
when we think our future, we never do mistake like past.
matural is ort future
강사 첨삭
Hi Gi [이름]!^^
I\'m so sorry about your loss.
It might be a hard time but think of it that your Grandfather is now
in a better and safer place.
Things will be better soon. I will include him with my prayers.
I will talk to you when you get back.
Take care!^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you today:
Hi teacher Debby
>> CORRECTI will not listen our lesson tomorrow because my grandfather elder brother passed away yesterday.
>> I will not listen to our lesson tomorrow because my grandfather\'s elder brother passed away yesterday. Today, this is reason My feeling is soso(neutral)
>> Today, this is reason my feeling is so-so(neutral).so I went to the funeral hall yesterday..
>> So I went to the funeral hall yesterday..and I will go to the funeral to see the last as relative
>> And I will go to the funeral to see him last as a relative. relative will start on 6 am to bury him.
>> The burial with start at 6:00.
I\'d like you to pray for my elder grandfaher...>> I\'d like you to pray for my elder grandfaher.<H/W>Is it right to sacrifice some animals to have our clothing?
>> CORRECTWhat do you think?
>> CORRECTI love animals but I think that people need sacrifice some animals to eat, wear...
>> I love animals but I think that people need to sacrifice some animals to eat, and wear.So I don\'t want to thoughtless sacrifices animals.
>> So I don\'t want to sacrifices animals with cruelty.They must gain things from natural as much as they need.
>> They must gain things naturally as much as they need.human stood on all animals has to defend thier ecosystem as the lord of all creation.
>> Humans are on top of all the animals and they have to defend thier ecosystem as the lord of all creation.when we think our future, we never do mistake like past.matural is ort future
>> When we think our future, we never do mistakes like in the past.matural is ort future
>> Nature is our future.
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